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We sat in your car

Small talk had vanished

Into a desire filled silence

In which we didn't know how to fill the void

I stared into your eyes

My heart pounding in my chest

Beating for your touch

Wanting to kiss your lips

You stared back at me

Breath heavy in your lungs

As your eyes close

And you moved your head to mine

And we kissed

So passionately my body melted in your arms

My soul came alive with the touch of your lips

Against my very own

Desire beat from my heart

Through my blood

And every cell in my body

Ignited with raw passion

Never could I get enough of that feeling

I know by the way you kissed me

That you felt it too

And in that instant I realized I love you

Author's Note

Just a quick write showing how I feel about a very special person in my life.
Being in love is such an amazing feeling and I am so happy that I have found it after all this time.

Hope you all enjoy this poem. I didn't put much time or thought into it. I just wrote what came from my mind and heart and this is the end result. Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Norbanus]

With small-talk gone and void unfilled,
a spot where we’ve all been,
with pounding hear, that’s thrilled.
Staring in those eyes again.

‘And we kissed’—What a powered line.
One that every poet craves.
And tries to draw in their design.
To show the love which passion saves.

A touch of lips, live changing urge
in every body cell.
Ignition of a fire to purge,
all doubt, that I had fell.

The words so hard and yet so true,
so easy now, that I love you

[Hannah Jocks]

This was very well written and has absolutely amazing imagry! You should enter this into a poetry contest(: My bets. It would win!!

[Hannah Jocks]

I think its really sweet. And this kind of writing "quick write" and writing with "no thought" is true writing. That writing is the writing that comes from you heart and makes it marvelous. Great job.

[Sir Altitude]

I'm really happy that you found love, it really is a wonderful thing. Beautiful poem.

[Ireca]

I can definitely relate to this poem. Keep up the self-expression.

[Keith]

Simple and expressive. I liked it.

Only thought I had:
Against my very own - ("my very own" threw off the pace for me. Maybe replace with "mine")

[Jibey]

I am glad you have felt that very special passion

[Adam Smith]

This is a beautiful poem, it has such emotion! Well done.

[MusicLover]

This is so beautiful.

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Beautiful piece! I love the line "my soul came alive with the touch of your lips".

You're an excellent writer! Keep your head held high and don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise!

[TKBickel]

I find the best things come to you by instict. This writting proves that. May all your future kiss be that passionate.