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We sat in your car

Small talk had vanished

Into a desire filled silence

In which we didn't know how to fill the void

I stared into your eyes

My heart pounding in my chest

Beating for your touch

Wanting to kiss your lips

You stared back at me

Breath heavy in your lungs

As your eyes close

And you moved your head to mine

And we kissed

So passionately my body melted in your arms

My soul came alive with the touch of your lips

Against my very own

Desire beat from my heart

Through my blood

And every cell in my body

Ignited with raw passion

Never could I get enough of that feeling

I know by the way you kissed me

That you felt it too

And in that instant I realized I love you

Author's Note

Just a quick write showing how I feel about a very special person in my life.
Being in love is such an amazing feeling and I am so happy that I have found it after all this time.

Hope you all enjoy this poem. I didn't put much time or thought into it. I just wrote what came from my mind and heart and this is the end result. Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Norbanus]

With small-talk gone and void unfilled,
a spot where we’ve all been,
with pounding hear, that’s thrilled.
Staring in those eyes again.

‘And we kissed’—What a powered line.
One that every poet craves.
And tries to draw in their design.
To show the love which passion saves.

A touch of lips, live changing urge
in every body cell.
Ignition of a fire to purge,
all doubt, that I had fell.

The words so hard and yet so true,
so easy now, that I love you

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

lovely love poem well done good luck in my comp

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You express very freely the emotions in this scene as two people come together (excuse the pun!) in a car. Hardly the most romantic venue more of a sordix sexual encounter. Thankfully for you it transmuted into something far more profound.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

I like that you are able to open the heart with words. You express, here in this piece, a moment many are able to relate with. An enjoyable write. Thank you for sharing, yourself in word.

[DejaRose]

This is an amazing poem!!!!!!!

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Alot of passion and emotion. The line " My soul came alive with the touch of your lips" really stayed with me.
Keep it up

[Helen Crutchett]

Lovely romantic and passionate write! Ah, that magical moment shared with someone we love is timeless and enthralling. Well done and thank you for submitting this to the contest. Good luck!

[Brett Hernan]

My heart jumped when I read,
'I stared into your eyes
My heart pounding in my chest'
The raw emotion, spilled so effortlessly in this poem, is the source of some of its strength.
There are few who don't want to or haven't wanted to be in love.
The popular media in our western industrialised culture fetishises this romantic love scenario in which you and your lover became for us the lead actors.
Thanks for letting us all sit there in that car, in the excitation of anticipation too, and also thanks for letting me be a part of the audience!

[stars are far]

That was a very great, passionate work, well done :)

[Kat Blair]

Ya know, this is how I feel about a very special person in my life is well. Love the write:)