Whisper

Whisper to me. A slight erotic write.

Whisper to me in the dark

Kiss me softly in the park

Tangle your hands in my hair

Trace your fingers everywhere

 

Run your tongue along my jaw

My body responds to you with awe

Place your hips against mine

Let our bodies intertwine

 

Move in and out, oh so slow

As my pleasure begins to grow

Lift your hands to cup my face

While we make love in this empty place

 

Whisper words of love to me

As we sit under the old oak tree

Entangled hands at our side

The love we share will not be denied

Author's Note

So this is the first thing I have uploaded in quite some time now. I feel bad that I haven't been on here much in the last few months. To put it quite simply during the week I am slightly depressed and the weekends are filled with love and romance from my wonderful boyfriend. The week goes by slow and are filled with depressing events and life. I have been unable to find a job in over seven months and its taking its toll on me. So I have not been in the right mind set or mood to write, but I am trying to write myself out of that now, if that makes any since whatsoever.

So I hope that you all enjoy this piece. It took me a while to get the wording just right and the feelings to really show in this. I feel like it needs to be longer. I will probably add more on to it. But for now it is done and this is the end result.

Let me know what you think of it please. Thanks everyone.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Short and sweet and very very romantic.
I enjoyed this peace.... i love the way it rhymes to :)
All goes together quite nicely :)
Great write i enjoyed it.
Im sorry about whats been going on in your life, but im guessing by the comments from a year ago that things are better by now, i surly hope.
Congratulations on placing in my contest!

[Chellie]

Thank you kindly for the lovely review. And yes, things are much better now than back then. It was a hard thing to overcome, but I had a wonderful person in my life to help me through it. I'm glad you liked this piece enough to give me an award. Thank you thank you thank you.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your most welcome, im so glad to here that :)
Thats always great im glad you did :)
HAHA it was truly an amazing peace you deserve it.
Your welcome your welcome ur welcome :P

[F Jerry]

This piece is a real joy to read. Beautifully written. I love the way it flows.

[Chellie]

Thank you so much.

[Enigma]

Beautiful, and sensuous.

[That_Girl]

Beautiful descriptions. Well done!

[Jibey]

The poem flows beautifully, with a beguliong rhythm and gentle delight in the pleasure of love... It has a deeply romantic feel to it and feels like lips that press and caress, like fingers that gently explore and adore... It sent a sparkle down my spine...

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of desire. Good to be open to touch and kind emotion. Make us feel alive and strong. No weakness in the poem. Nice flow of thoughts and a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote