Angel Eyes

while sitting staring at the stars, 

Thinking about the many Nights I've held you in my arms

I can see all the beauty, 

All the beauty within your eyes

As I think about your smile,

I feel my soul begin to cry

Oh sweet Angel eyes I will always love you

Please keep holding me in your wings 

For I need the healing Your tenderness brings to me 

I know I won't, 

So please don't...

ever let me go

Think about all the good times, 

Try and forget about the bad

The times we share together

Are moments others wish they had

You changed my life for the better

Giving me hope and love like no other 

Whether apart or together 

You are and will be

My everything forever

Oh sweet Angel eyes I will always love you

Please keep holding me in your heart

For you will never be replaced

In the endless space I hold you in mine 

No matter how broken it may seem

Nothing could ever tear us apart 

 Or wake me from this Heavenly dream 

Honestly I never believed to discover

A friend and lover such as you

Whom I so cherish and treasure

Touching me in ways filled With such wonder and pleasure

Slowing the flowing motions of time

Lost then found in your eyes

Thankful and grateful for these stars above

Flying and falling in-between breaths

Always reminding me in your sighs, 

While calling me to come closer

Holding you against my chest

I'm blessed...

 To feel the strength and power of our LOVE 

Oh MY sweet Juliana .........I will always love you!

Reviews

[Penelope Voljeti]

Something that worries me a bit about this piece is the kind of cliche that the words "angel eyes" have when they are put next to each other. It immediately gave me a kind of idea of what to expect, which is something that I try to stay away form as a writer. It's written very smoothly and nicely, though, so just a small note for you :)

[Tomoe Tellez]

I agree with Dreamer, you did an amazing job with this poem, every word is just perfect.

[Robert]

This is a really heart telling piece you have written. I enjoyed the free verse style and how you expressed your true thoughts here without hesitation. You even let the reader have a name to the love you have for this person. In intimate sharing of the love you have for her.

[Lyingwithlions]

Thank you so much for your comment Robert.

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH gosh! This is MIND-BLOWING piece ... SUPER LOVELY :D I just felt every single word I read! You've described the Love for the Love of your life in a Beautiful and Adorable way. I truly enjoyed it. Keep it up. It is very Heart-felt piece.
Keep writing like this.
And you've used the words in a great unique way.
Just BEAUTIFUL
Thanks for sharing such a LOVELY poetry!

[Lyingwithlions]

Thank you so much for such a flattering comment. :)

[binibiningmaya]

ohhh. so sweet :)
how lucky is she that she have someone like you...

great work sir :)

[Lyingwithlions]

Thank you. :) But I think I'm the lucky one to have someone like her.

I believe we all know what we wish for and dream of in regards to love, so don't ever compromise or settle for less.

[binibiningmaya]

Both of you guys were lucky to have each other :)
You guys showed me that love... true love still exist. :)
Thank you and more power sir! :)

[samiha zubair]

It makes the person really lucky to find such love. Sometimes we undo it by setting too high standards for our partner when wr are not able to handle it. If such a mistake avoided so many relationships can be saved. Good piece and thank you for sending your request

[Lyingwithlions]

Thank you for accepting and reading. I agree it's not easy at all, the most import piece of the puzzle of love is starting with our-self. It took me a long time to figure that one out.