My Everthing

Flowing motions captured in words 

Crafted by hand into simple verse 

A melody of devotions are heard

As I listen to angels speak

Stirring a multitude of emotions 

You are my everything .... 

And you couldn't be more beautiful to me 

Like the sunshine you light up my life 

No matter how dark it seems 

You bring me joy and happiness

More than I ever imagined

In my my wildest dreams

You are my everything ... 

And you couldn't be more precious to me

As caring and loving as a moon lit bright 

You are my brightest shining star,

In the silence of night 

Honored to have you,

As my friend and wife 

You are my everything ... 

And you couldn't be more amazing to me

I know the amount of my love for you, 

Like the sky and universe above, 

Will never end 

My love for you will forever

Grow and live on

You are my everything..... 

And you couldn't be more wonderful to me

You are the reason,

I've finally opened up my eyes

That now can see,

And my ears so to truly hear

Gazing to the heavens above 

Listening to angels sing

Only brings me closer,

To you and my children

 

I couldn't be more thankful

You are my everything...So true.

Reviews

[binibiningmaya]

Awesome... I can feel the overflowing love :)

[Lyingwithlions]

Thank you, that means a lot to me. I know I tried to let it overflow in to this poem. :)

[binibiningmaya]

You are welcome Sir :)
Keep up the good work! :)

[Rick Puetter]

Beautiful sentiment, written with passion and describing true love. Wonderful words that are fully heartfelt.

Greatly enjoyed. High marks.

Best regards,

Rick

[Lyingwithlions]

Thank you Rick, that means a lot to me. Thank you for reading, and reviewing! The emailed comments and suggestions have been extremely helpful. :)

[Cherry Pepperweb]

So very lovely. Beautiful poetry that expresses the deep love so wonderfully.
Nice work.

[Lyingwithlions]

Thank you for viewing, and for your comments! :)

[Dara]

Oh this is just wonderful and a perfect tribute to your beautiful wife! I have seen how she is and completes you in every sense of the word. Your poetry is simply amazing cuz :-) I look forward to reading them all.

[Lyingwithlions]

Thank you!! It feels good to finally share them again. :)

[Levi Levin]

Very vivid and passionate poem--well done!