Passion Behind Those Eyes

such passion lies behind your eyes, burning with desires one love one power, the war between the two is ever going constantly raging against one another, a feeling of helplessness is brought on from the confusion, yearning to be loved, yet you want the power such a dangerous combination your heart is thus becoming a great treasure, diamond in the rough

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[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Just need to separate each set of lines. Every statement need the opportunity to make it point. Those diamond in the rough are rare to find. If you do. Best hold on tight. A excellent poem.
Coyote