Complete

A love poem i wrote for my man. Yes the guy in the picture is my man James

His eyes amongst mine

his sweet breaths mist

his rough hands upon my back

my bodys bliss

his lips meet mine

and my heart smiles

my mind goes a hundred miles

while my heart goes one oh five

my mind is in the air

my heart skips a beat

my hands want to discover

my life feels complete

my heart is in sync

it skips a beat

what its been longing for

it finally meets

Dedicated to the one I love

♥James Jonathan Hill♥

Reviews

[snapjack]

Aw, I know how you feel :). I like the flow of the poem and how it isn't all over the place. Love it

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I liked the rhythmic way you set this one very romantic it's great to love someone who inspires you did a wonderful job.

[Breezie Kae]

"my mind goes a hundred miles
while my heart goes one oh five"
Beautiful. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. Being content and happy in the emotion of love is best days of a life. A excellent poem.
Coyote