Hushed

A Poem by Chase Weik

A repeating stanza poem for creative writing class.

Travesty. Travesty.

Couldn’t convey,

Mask your impurity in rose colored tint

What kind of life is this?

Keep the thoughts shrouded

Tell not a soul

The healing’s worth quitting

If they’re unaware

Collected facade

Festering core

Plagued by the need

Of a damning circumstance.

How to persist?

A catch-22 --

Chained to the past

Constrained by perception

Travesty. Travesty.

Couldn’t convey,

Mask your impurity in rose colored tint

What kind of life is this?

Oh, what kind of life?

© 2017 Chase Weik

Author's Note

This is my first non-rhyming poem so I would love any constructive criticism! Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed!

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Maria

Captivating and like how you used your words to express and convey the feelings and emotions. Good job.

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Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad that you liked it!

7 Years Ago

Sure thing. and I really did enjoy this

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Added on June 2, 2017
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Author

Chase Weik

Litchfield, CT

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I am an aspiring writer living in CT. and attend Wamogo Regional high school. I have always believed in writing as an escape or way to express myself, but I also just love to tell a good story here an.. more..

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