Ink Black

Not all is lost

Her tears stain the floor

She's alone in the darkness 

Someone worth saving

Author's Note

This is my first haiku so I really hope that you guys enjoyed it! I'm very open to any and all constructive criticism! Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Neal S]

I really like this! Deep emotion in few words. Just great!

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

This haiku may be short, but it has a deeper meaning to it.

[Amy Couture]

I really like this, I can really picture the girl. Good job.

[calli]

This is very deep with good simplicity

[ReedWrite]

Love it.
It's simply...Perfect!
I totally suck at haiku...and that's frustrating, because they're so totally cool.
I love when someone does them well.

[Chase Weik]

Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it!