Reflection of silence

This poetry is related to the silence and piece in society

The peaceful world dancing in happiness,
Everyone out listening to zephyr,
Nothing here seems so serious,
None of the heart rages with fire.

The patience in minds and hearts,
They understand others without uttering words,
And without puking the tart,
This is the beautiful silent world.

The silence in the city,
The silence of understanding,
No faces here gets witty,
This silence ends all the misunderstanding.

Reviews

[MantaStyle]

In this poem, silence means peace right?

If so, the poem suggests peace to be a quiet thing almost close to emptiness. It presents quite a dreary tone of global silence throughout the world. The people living in the poem almost seem robotic as they have no fire in their hearts, no jokes to be witty about and how they seem to understand each other without speaking. It is true that patience is mentioned which is required but I think a better word to describe it would be tolerance and empathy.

The poem is nice though. It's just a bit of a nitpick on my side; not gonna lie.