Vanity

Vanity

A Poem by Quill~

Break the mirror into pieces,
Kiss the heel of Sexy,
Say "good bye."
Vanity no longer idolized,
She mutilates her own reflection,
Her face no longer recognized.
She breaks the mold; hidden in disguise,
Crush the vertebrae of deception,
A refreshing reinvention,
She starts anew...

© 2013 Quill~


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I'm wondering at what might cause such a break with values held. Makes me wonder, makes me think. Art at it's finest :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Quill~

12 Years Ago

:) Thank you for your kind words.

Well said, though sometimes it takes a little bit of aging to gain such wisdom. Nice poem.


Posted 12 Years Ago


A stunning piece! Full of conviction! Nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


All creation requires some destruction...so an ending opens a way to a new beginning

Simple, yet profound since the application is far reaching.

I like the rhythm and cadence of the lines, the way they stand and then run, twirl and then dip in an enticing sort of enchantment that titillates the intellect while taunting sensuality...

Just enough unpredictable variance to interest while yet retaining a catchy rhyming pattern. Sophisticated in its simplicity and direct approach. Your writing shows considerable promise!

Posted 12 Years Ago


a putting away of one thing to be ready for the next.. well done..

Posted 12 Years Ago


love the line "kiss the heel of sexy". could write endless poetry from that image alone! wonderfully done Charlsei

Posted 12 Years Ago


This seems like a poem written for the purpose of healing. Though it has a positive ending it still holds much sadness. An Excellent write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


amen, sister :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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you twisted words into incredible visuals. a wonderly creative piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago



Glad to see that you are starting over.
A stiletto is a good place to start, it '
will shatter many men`s heart.
I would like to see more of this newly
created writing.
----- John

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 31, 2012
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I'm a romantic at heart, here to express myself through my work...I write for me. I welcome others to read. I look forward to learning and sharing thoughts, through poetry and stories. :) Quill~ .. more..

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