Break the mirror into pieces, Kiss the heel of Sexy, Say "good bye." Vanity no longer idolized, She mutilates her own reflection, Her face no longer recognized. She breaks the mold; hidden in disguise, Crush the vertebrae of deception, A refreshing reinvention, She starts anew...
All creation requires some destruction...so an ending opens a way to a new beginning
Simple, yet profound since the application is far reaching.
I like the rhythm and cadence of the lines, the way they stand and then run, twirl and then dip in an enticing sort of enchantment that titillates the intellect while taunting sensuality...
Just enough unpredictable variance to interest while yet retaining a catchy rhyming pattern. Sophisticated in its simplicity and direct approach. Your writing shows considerable promise!
Glad to see that you are starting over.
A stiletto is a good place to start, it '
will shatter many men`s heart.
I would like to see more of this newly
created writing.
----- John
I'm a romantic at heart, here to express myself through my work...I write for me. I welcome others to read. I look forward to learning and sharing thoughts, through poetry and stories. :)
Quill~
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