The One...

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I wish to ignore the noisy confusion of the stars,
To flounder in the depths of his universe, unnoticed;
To taste the tears on my lover's lips,
and lick the salt of his sorrow...
To give strength to the walls of devotion,
and beat strong in my lover's heart...

~A thousand times bursting~
I will be the one to steal his breath...

Reviews

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Wow, the depth of sentiment and love in this poem is beautiful to behold. Every image and the way you delicately string your words around this write, is amazing.

"A thousand times bursting
I will be the one to steal his breath..."

Could not think of a more breathtaking end to a brilliant poem. Awesome work.

[Chris Micha]

The confusion of the stars can be like having loud static in ones ears. To kiss the sorrows away and take on the burden, is beyond special.

You are brilliant, a genius of love. Bravo my dear poet!

[Quill~]

:) thank you for your sweet words Christian...means a lot. :)

[Sami Khalil]

A thousand time bravo on splendid writings like this one. It bursts with beauty and sincerity...:)....

[Quill~]

:) thank you Sami (a thousand times) :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).....

[Baby Ricochet]

Love the second line..........................

[Quill~]

:) thank you...mine too. :)