Virtue...

Fade into you...

The pale moon hides,
as the morning peeks in
through her window,
like a silent wind,
he enters the room,

A warm breeze
caressing her skin,
whispering sweet,
sweet nothings as she dreams,
enticing her to spread her glory,

With tender adoration,
his feather touch
graces the crest,
of her succulent breast;

Overwhelmed by his thirst
to milk her desire,
he bestows a gift of gratitude
upon her fragrant flower;

The virginal spring awakens within,
her virtue, she willingly surrenders…

Author's Note

Reviews

[Relic]

You have a skill at slipping in soft words for raw ones while still keeping the intensity high. The pic is enough to drive a hot blooded man wild with passion. Wonderful erotic writing Quill.

[Quill~]

:) thank you.... I'm happy you stopped by to read me.

[David Scott]

Penned with a feathery lightness. Nice little tickle.

[Quill~]

:) thank you darlin'.

[MoriartyMesa]

Loved the wording, loved that touch of the brush your work always has, the music, for one reason or another came to this, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xrd3lSn5FqQ&feature=share&list=FLJ5MHcc3JVk3GmsugG4dYNg



Loved this, but the gray cells brought me to Micheal

[Quill~]

:) thank you muchly!

[Torao]

Teasing is torture...glad I'm a sadist. Excellent!

[Quill~]

:) thank you!...good to know. ;)

[Mark]

Very yummy, torture to a starving man.

[Quill~]

:) love your comment, thanks!

[Pryde Foltz]

Very sensual, Quill. Quite the sexy picture.

[Quill~]

:) thank you kindly!

[Baby Ricochet]

OMG I love Mazzy Star. Beautiful poem Quill. I'd like to think Hope Sandoval would like it

[Quill~]

:) thank you!

[Trace]

Very interesting poetry here. very sensual, very intimate and very good.

Trace

[Quill~]

:) thanks for the nice review.

[Leigh]

Your words of tender erotic beauty paint a picture of love and lust that is a masterpiece

[Quill~]

:) thanks so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and tender words leading the reader to good places. Photo gave life to the poem. Private rooms allow us to be nude and without fear to separate passion and love. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Quill~]

:) thank you for the sweet comment.