Virtue...

Fade into you...

The pale moon hides,
as the morning peeks in
through her window,
like a silent wind,
he enters the room,

A warm breeze
caressing her skin,
whispering sweet,
sweet nothings as she dreams,
enticing her to spread her glory,

With tender adoration,
his feather touch
graces the crest,
of her succulent breast;

Overwhelmed by his thirst
to milk her desire,
he bestows a gift of gratitude
upon her fragrant flower;

The virginal spring awakens within,
her virtue, she willingly surrenders…

Author's Note

Reviews

[~]

Oh this is tantalizing and extremely erotic. You have such a delicate sensuality in this poem that makes you want to read it over and over again.

[Quill~]

:) well thank you so much!

[Chris Micha]

Oh my my my...I am in love with this! So naughty and yet so elegant in the way it was written. Bravo my dear poet! :)

[Quill~]

:) thanks again, Christian.

[Stephen]

Beautiful horny poem! It`s very intoxicating! Your so warm .. you know what? The pic. of that hot lady lying in the bed making my body warm and allowing me make some mess imagine her on my mind ... and that`s what a true-writer wants a reader to feel the true power .. a true desire of love through the stuffs ... this beautiful write`s much appreciative.

And..hey, Nice butts, huh... she`s serving herself in that pic. and that`s all what freaking my mind, lady .. what you done? Huh? You make me making a mess right now.Holy--crap! I need a long-crap right now.... *Wink*

Lovely write!

[Quill~]

:) thank you Stephen.

[Stephen]

I`m honored to read a hottest "Quill`s" words. These words quenched the thirst of my empathy indeed so, it`s my pleasure to read this .. i`m going to look forward to reading your stuffs!

[Quill~]

:) well thanks for reading.

[J.L Hunter]

I love how you embed images and music with your words, almost like a trifecta of sensations that seem to flow seamlessly together. Very good write. Thank you.

[BL]

Sexy, sensual and exciting, really love this one Quill

[Shaun Payton]

Quite romantic. Caressing the skin and passionate spirit. You have a wonderful grace with a touch of potent sensuality.

[Quill~]

:) thanks for your kind words Shaun!

[Shaun Payton]

You are welcome Quill:)

[Frieda P]

Well this one woke me up! Elegantly sensual Quill....

The virginal spring awakens within,
her virtue, she willingly surrenders…

Scrumptious ending!

[Quill~]

:) thank you muchly!... glad you liked it, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Loved it, I have to get around to visiting you more often, you blow my skirt up. ;-)

[Just Jayren]

I think I need a cold shower...

If I had mornings like these, I wouldn't have a life outside of the bedroom.

Boy do you get me excited woman... I love it

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is so passionate and calm, I love it! Thanks for sharing. :D

[ron]

Love this one Quill. Passionate, romantic, and sensual.

[Quill~]

:) why thank you, ron!

[ron]

You are most welcome Quill :)

[Quill~]

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