Vanilla Skies...

Vanilla Skies...

A Poem by Quill~
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For POEMS and POETRY Summer Competition

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Take me to London
where the green path
leads to a pink rose garden...


I'll wear a wide brim hat
and a flirty blue sundress
to catch the spark in your eyes
every time the wind whistles...


We'll gaze at the vanilla sky
until the ice cream clouds

drip

drip

drip

from the heat of the sun
creating milky puddles...


Our memories will taste sweeter
once they melt away...

 

© 2013 Quill~


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Some great imagery here. Great job quill

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) thank you BR!
Lovely words Quill and love that photo too and yes sometimes memories are sweeter once they melt away.:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) I concur.. thank you sweet Rose.
Oh Quill, this is beautiful! You've created a lovely scene, vivid imagery and lovely wording.

I loved the music, too. Billie Holiday is awesome! :)

~ Noodle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this!
A interesting and unique write that showcase a vivid image of bliss that's under a vanilla sky. A fine write and read as well. Nice work. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) thank you Bpoet...your kind words are appreciated!
The summer is the season to dream and fall in love or is it spring? Love Billie Holiday, could listen to her and Ella Fitzgerald all the day long while sitting on my front porch sipping southern sweet tea. Splendid read and write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) it's all the time if you ask me. Thank you Brandon!
Sweet tea is always nice.
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The stakes have been raised in that competition then! You have really captured the summer feel with surreal references to summer, this is very song like also and would make a brilliant ballad and or love song.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quill~

11 Years Ago

really?... that's a huge compliment. *smiling huge* :))
BL

11 Years Ago

Yes really really
Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) ....................
This makes me want to dance like Ginger Rogers in your milky puddles, and I love Billy Holiday! How charming, it's like an old fashioned long song, love this Quill!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) thanks Frieda!..didn't ya know I'm a romantic? ;)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I do now...ha I could hardly tell from that trunk scene! ;-)
Quill~

11 Years Ago

oh yeah, I forgot about that... i'm also dark. muahahahahaha!
good poem, artistically stated

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) thank you Tomahawk Joe!
Great imagery. You did a wonderful job at creating a very serene and beautiful atmosphere. Great work Quill!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) thank you Keith... means a lot that you stopped by to read.
Beautiful poetry and a amazing song. I learn to love Jazz in Austin, Texas. Had good Jazz clubs and the old timers from the New Orleans hanging around. Poetry took me on a good road trip. Thank you for the excellent poetry and good music.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) many thank yous!... love jazz...it sweeps me off my feet.

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