Lipstick stains...

A Senryu.

Tracing lipstick stains;
The clarity of a kiss
left on his collar...

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Gorgeous dude. He's probably gay.

[Peter H]

lmao

[Shaun Payton]

Oh good..A thought provoking one..is it a cheater caught, or a playful reminder of a kiss. I like my second thought best cause cheaters suck.. :(

[Quill~]

i'll leave it up to your imagination...
thanks again Shaun! *hugs* :)

[Shaun Payton]

I like imagination..ive never been hugged by a quill before hehe Thanks:)

[BL]

So sensual with your short words, where did you get that photo of me from?

[Quill~]

thank you Bluely... I stole your photo from your place (and I'm not sorry)... ;)

[SyberRose]

Nicely done Quill and I love that photo too...who wouldnt ha...Rose

[Quill~]

it's one of my favorites... a well (un)dressed man is irresistible... :)

[Quill~]

thank you muchly Rose!

[SyberRose]

haa yes

[Quill~]

:D

[Fernando Pessoa]

I really am amazed that three small lines can be simply flooded with so much depth and sensuality. Seemingly small things can truly overtake one's world!

What are the three words you never want to hear while making love? "Honey, I'm home!” - Ken Hammond

[Quill~]

bwahahahahaha! that would be a sticky situation, eh?
thank you Paul... you tickle me. ;)

[Fernando Pessoa]

Now, someone has to tickle you, and I'll gladly volunteer! ;)

[Quill~]

*blushing*... please... and thank you! ;D

[Frieda P]

I like this, you've left it up to the reader to decide, is it betrayal or a signature mark. ;-)

[Quill~]

;) yep... it's a mark never to be forgotten.
Thanks Frieda!

[Frieda P]

I like your style ;-) My pleasure!

[Quill~]

and I like yours ;D
thanksies!

[Brett Pritchard]

Good piece.
Straddling the line neatly between sensuality and accusation.

Well done. :)

[Quill~]

:) it seems to do that.... this is a designed "straddling" of sorts -I love your metaphor..
thank you Brett.

[Brett Pritchard]

Quite welcome. 😊
Yes I do love a good metaphor.
Very nice "designed straddle". 😉

[Quill~]

*he he* ;D
you are too kind....love your smilies, btw!

[Brett Pritchard]

I do my best to incorporate word play Q. 😉

[Quill~]

me too... it's the best part. :D

[Mark]

mmm.. could be sensual could be accusatory. Nice job. :)

[Quill~]

it could be...but then again... is it? :)
thank you Mark!

[sounds of shadows]

sensual senryu - very nice

[Quill~]

:) thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. A lipstick stain can rebirth the beauty of the sweet kiss. Thank you for amazing words.
Coyote

[Quill~]

:) your kind words have a nice ring to it. thank you Coyote.