Just a little bite...

A tempting senryu...

Just a little taste,
a sweet sinful temptation,
melts with every bite...

Reviews

[Nick.B]

Sweet and very "sinful", my mind went to a whole different place after reading this piece :D....very tasty

[Quill~]

:) you always keep me smiling when you drop by, thank you!

[Baby Ricochet]

I can do that

[Quill~]

:)) I bet you can! lol
thank you.

[quinfinn]

ah, gorgeous.....nothing like a pair of glossy lips and teeth clenched around a finger to put a man's mind in the gutter.....well penned!

[Quill~]

:)) bwahahaha! thank you Quinfinn! lol

[Jack...]

Delicious...

[Quill~]

;)) thanks Jack!

[s y e]

Short and wow, powerful lines that says alot. Nicely done.

[Quill~]

:) thank you!