Just a little bite...

A tempting senryu...

Just a little taste,
a sweet sinful temptation,
melts with every bite...

Reviews

[krish]

Yes, I do agree with your this write :) I think you've got your Temptation :) A beautiful write once again. You're writing very well... your writes're Erotic indeed but they're all meaningful i must gotta say.

[Quill~]

:) you are a charm Krishnan, thank you!

[sounds of shadows]

... clearly, you are a woman of *good taste* ...

[Eagle Cruagh]

Dammmm , Yur always talkn `bout that good stuff to eat.
Ahl be ritght over and we`ll have a good steak.

[Quill~]

I'm a foodie...that's probably why! lol

[Eagle Cruagh]

Y`all know the dish I`m waiting for and I figure you
know all about cook`n it up.

[Quill~]

I know a chef.... ;)

[Layla J Omorose]

Though I am not entirely familiar with this style of poetry I did enjoy it. I like that fact that the temptation could range from having a bite of an apple to something more seductive.

[khalid]

very sweet..short but in target..

[Quill~]

:) thanks!

[Sky]

Tasty treat! love the seduction! :)

[Quill~]

:) awe, thank you!

[Wondering Mind]

I like choclate too...yep, that was the safest comment I can come up with

[Quill~]

:) Thank you, I think we have something in common.

[Wondering Mind]

being safe?

[Quill~]

:)) chocolate, silly... I'm all about danger. lol

[Wondering Mind]

just checking...:D

[Quill~]

:D :D

[The 13th Eros]

You take the brevity of senryu space and fill it with a landscape of sweet, devouring sensuality... Delicious..

[Quill~]

:) thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

Photo and words is very nice. Words gave life to your words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Quill~]

:) your comment is appreciated!

[Leigh]

Sinful love

[Quill~]

:) thank you!