Just a little bite...
A Poem by
Quill~
A tempting senryu...
Just a little taste, a sweet sinful temptation, melts with every bite...
© 2013 Quill~
Reviews
Yes, I do agree with your this write :) I think you've got your Temptation :) A beautiful write once again. You're writing very well... your writes're Erotic indeed but they're all meaningful i must gotta say.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
:) you are a charm Krishnan, thank you!
... clearly, you are a woman of *good taste* ...
Posted 11 Years Ago
... clearly, you are a woman of *good taste* ...
Dammmm , Yur always talkn `bout that good stuff to eat.
Ahl be ritght over and we`ll have a good steak.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Dammmm , Yur always talkn `bout that good stuff to eat.
Ahl be ritght over and we`ll have a good steak.
11 Years Ago
I'm a foodie...that's probably why! lol
11 Years Ago
Y`all know the dish I`m waiting for and I figure you
know all about cook`n it up.
11 Years Ago
I know a chef.... ;)
Though I am not entirely familiar with this style of poetry I did enjoy it. I like that fact that the temptation could range from having a bite of an apple to something more seductive.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Though I am not entirely familiar with this style of poetry I did enjoy it. I like that fact that the temptation could range from having a bite of an apple to something more seductive.
very sweet..short but in target..
Posted 11 Years Ago
very sweet..short but in target..
Tasty treat! love the seduction! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Tasty treat! love the seduction! :)
11 Years Ago
:) awe, thank you!
I like choclate too...yep, that was the safest comment I can come up with
Posted 11 Years Ago
I like choclate too...yep, that was the safest comment I can come up with
11 Years Ago
:) Thank you, I think we have something in common.
11 Years Ago
:)) chocolate, silly... I'm all about danger. lol
11 Years Ago
just checking...:D
You take the brevity of senryu space and fill it with a landscape of sweet, devouring sensuality... Delicious..
Posted 11 Years Ago
You take the brevity of senryu space and fill it with a landscape of sweet, devouring sensuality... Delicious..
11 Years Ago
:) thank you!
Photo and words is very nice. Words gave life to your words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
Photo and words is very nice. Words gave life to your words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
11 Years Ago
:) your comment is appreciated!
Sinful love
Posted 11 Years Ago
Sinful love
11 Years Ago
:) thank you!
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Quill~ Pink Clouds
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I'm a romantic at heart, here to express myself through my work...I write for me. I welcome others to read. I look forward to learning and sharing thoughts, through poetry and stories. :)
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