Good morning, love...

Are you an Angel?... ;)

Palpitating heart
dreams still flickering
trembling in splendid spoils
touched by an Angel
or could he be more?...

Soft downy feathers
tenderly grazed, tickling my skin
quietly he crept
and layed beside me
his eyes stripped me bare

Naked...blushing all over
down to my anxious thighs
engulfed in a moonlight haze
a blurry vision
pleasing me in manys ways

No mortal man could
bestow this kind of magic
to leave a dripping trail
of white washed dreams
in wanton beads of morning dew...

Reviews

[Brian]

Very good imagery and was very classy. I hope this came from a real-life experience for you! Everyone deserves to feel like this and its nice knowing that this kind of love still exists

[Quill~]

:) thank you. It did come from something very real, a "heaven on earth" kinda love. Very ethereal.

[Fernando Pessoa]

There is such a gentle, sensual beauty in the light as it grows here. A light within and without that brings the deepest sense of pure joy you never wish to end.

"We're all kissed by angels but some of us never think to pucker." ~ Terri Guillemets

[Quill~]

:) thank you! Even your review is poetic.
I love the quote!- I may have to put that on my tagline.x

[Kashif Waqas Ramay]

now i know your kind of poetry...:P
great imagination....

[Quill~]

*he he* ;)

[Quill~]

:)) thank you muchly.

[Brett Moore]

I love the language, but more over, I love that you put me there, in the moment with you. Great imagery. Not quite erotic, this walks the line.. which makes it much more interesting. Good work!

[Quill~]

:) thank you Brett.

[Buddhistboy73]

a sensual, dreamy write....I feel your words, and the erotic sensual nature of your longing in this piece...you do a good job of taking your reader on a journey.
Look forward to reading more of your work.
BB

[Quill~]

:) thanks, looking forward to reading more of yours too.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful description of emotion and touch in the poem. Good to fall with someone with no fear and desire to swim in a paradise. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Quill~]

:) thank you!

[khalid]

very sweet..nicely penned..i loved the images as well as the words picking..very sweet feelings of love and passion expressed in a very nice way..

[Quill~]

:) thank you, for your sweet comment.

[khalid]

my pleasure..

[Emily Feret]

Passionate love. Beautiful

[Quill~]

:) thank you.

[Sky]

well written! silky words flow together nicely. :)

[Quill~]

:) Thanks!

[Nick.B]

Tasty read, loved the last stanza felt "orgasmic"...anyway this poem has that momentum of two persons who wants each other by any expense(in the erotic and sexy way :D) great job, love it

[Quill~]

:) wow, thank you Nicky!