Good morning, love...

Are you an Angel?... ;)

Palpitating heart
dreams still flickering
trembling in splendid spoils
touched by an Angel
or could he be more?...

Soft downy feathers
tenderly grazed, tickling my skin
quietly he crept
and layed beside me
his eyes stripped me bare

Naked...blushing all over
down to my anxious thighs
engulfed in a moonlight haze
a blurry vision
pleasing me in manys ways

No mortal man could
bestow this kind of magic
to leave a dripping trail
of white washed dreams
in wanton beads of morning dew...

Reviews

[krish]

Nice write it showed you've a great passion of writing. Beautifully penned. you made my morning here.
100/100.

[Quill~]

:) thank you Krishnan.

[sounds of shadows]

such a sublime and sensual unfolding, both of words and character - and the final phrase - "white washed dreams in wanton beads of morning dew .." - I don't think I've ever heard it described so tenderly

[Mark]

Ethereal and sexy. Sex with Angels might be actually dangerous, but... who cares right? enjoyed reading. :)

[Quill~]

:) thank you for your sweet words Mark!

[Brett Pritchard]

Another beautiful and sensual piece. You convey images in such a classy way Q.

Great piece

BP

[Quill~]

:) thanks BP!

[SyberRose]

His eyes stripped me bare...I enjoyed that...nicely penned...Rose

[Sami Khalil]

A very classy and elegant style with great imagery . Well done ...:)

[Quill~]

:) thank you muchly!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Another Poet]

I like it, nice new poem. Good job.

[Quill~]

:) thank you muchly!

[Another Poet]

your welcome:)

[Quill~]

:)

[SteveB]

The last stanza is magnificent! Such vivid imagery and wonderful word choice. The "wanton" beads of dew, the "white washed dreams". Wonderful choices.
Yet another example of how to be truely seductively sensual without falling into the trap of being coarse.
Very well done.

[Quill~]

:) thank you SteveB!

[Hotwater]

And very nice too... just the right amount of 'heat' to bring a smile to the lips... thanx for the read, truly enjoyed. Not too sure you'd get that "blurry vision" from the cocoa though... hahaha.

*bird*

[Quill~]

:) thank you!
I agree...it has to be much stronger than hot cocoa.lol ;)

[End.]

You have such a way with imagery. I love how desire and passion are clearly expressed in a poignant, calming way. Your words calm me appropriately yet raise my heart beat at the perfect time. I really enjoyed this one. The last stanza is my favorite here. Really strong.

[Quill~]

:) I really appreciate your thoughts. thank you, glad you enjoyed!