Free Your Words...

Break free...

You long to utter the words,
to release what is caged,
in your glass heart,
a silhouette of frailty,
wrapped in a gray cloud,
hidden behind an invisible wall,
a ghost stands between us,
wearing a cloak of silence.
Quietly, you wait for the wind,
to blow the entity away;
A savior…to free your words…

Reviews

[Another Poet]

Love it, it was a beautiful poem.

[Quill~]

:) thank you.

[Another Poet]

Would you maybe check out my poems to?

[Quill~]

:) sure!

[Another Poet]

thank you!:-)

[Quill~]

:)

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I like the dichotomy here. The idea that words are being held back in the strong emotion of apprehension. And all that is needed for release is the simple, gentle savior of wind. This is a great write, Quill :)

[Quill~]

:) thank you...I was hoping that emotion came through in this piece.

[Kashif Waqas Ramay]

best yet so far....:)

[Quill~]

:) thank you Kashif!

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Wow. U got me speechless here.

[Quill~]

:) thank you.

[OBWhiteHawk]

That is really nice, amazing actually because I am sure many people feel this way. Longing to free their words. The title caught my interest and the poem was good enough to make me stop and comment.

[Quill~]

:) thank you for stopping by to read my words and leaving your comment.

[Dream Weaver]

Eerily exquisite...love the free spirited feel
and the words are to die for. Nicely done.

[Quill~]

:) thank you. It came from the heart.

[Dream Weaver]

You're welcome. :)

[MOON]

Lovely poignant write caged in your glass heart striking

[khalid]

very nicely penned. that usually happens when each one is afraid of what the words they say may cause. sometimes both of them have the same feelings but each of them cant express it although both of them at the same time are waiting for it..

[Quill~]

:) thank you. I appreciate your comment.

[Grey]

So much mystery wrapped in this write. Hmm, for someone specific maybe. We all get stifled for many reasons in life. The mysteries of the heart and just that, mysteries.

Beautifully written, hot stuff.

[Holly Mason]

hard place to be...exhaling slowly making sure your words do not escape...
but you want them to, cloak of silence the worst outfit to wear
thank you from the art work to the words just lovely
thank you for sharing