Forbidden Fruit...

A senryu.

Only when ripened,
is forbidden fruit worthy,
of the sinful bite…

Author's Note

In response to my friend, NickB's poem.

Reviews

[Inda]

Ohh so true! Nothing worse than a fruit in need of maturity; if you know what i mean.

[Quill~]

ha ha! Yes i do! thank you Inda. I look forward to reading you when I get back home from work...gotta go. :)

[quinfinn]

yes, eve has handed me that apple once or twice. beautifully written!

[Quill~]

:) thank you quinnfinn!

[quinfinn]

welcome!

[Quill~]

:)

[David Scott]

Yes indeed! Who wants a three day belly ache?
I think I can smell the fragrance of as the chemistry is becoming a full scale reaction calling the hungry to dine.
Well done. Style points for sure.

[Quill~]

:) Thanks David. It has to be ripe, wouldn't want to get an ache would we?

[Quill~]

This is so juicy dear, I'm glad I came over.... LOL
Wow, such a special one...

- Elisa

[Quill~]

:) Thank you Elisa.