Forbidden Fruit...

A senryu.

Only when ripened,
is forbidden fruit worthy,
of the sinful bite…

Author's Note

In response to my friend, NickB's poem.

Reviews

[Relic]

It's still sexy.

[Quill~]

:) Thank you kindly.

[Relic]

You're welcome kindly Quill. :)

[Quill~]

:)

[Relic]

:D

[Quill~]

:))

[MOON]

Smart write . To the point.

[Relic]

Sexy.

[sithlordjp]

This is very clever, well done!

[Seanh12]

Its good well written them few words say a lot. hank you for sending it to me. I love it.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure

[Nick.B]

Nice one, it really is worthy, you can feel it's warmth and sweetness...excellent response, love it, and the picture kind of says it all about the "forbidden fruit"...well done

[Jack...]

How can you say so much using only 11 words. This is powerful and sensual, all in a neat little package waiting to be opened.

[Leigh]

Totally agree