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A senryu.

 

I gave you the night,
greedily you stole the stars,
then, you asked for more…

Author's Note

Was it ever stolen?...

Reviews

[zainul]

You are a lovely giver.
Taker should be grateful.
But greed is insatiable.

[Quill~]

:) Love your comment. thank you.

[zainul]

You are always welcome.

[Quill~]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Kaylor Mason]

It's sad, but this does describe a lot of people

[Quill~]

it is sad.Thank you for reading Kailor.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem and artwork. In so few words. You open a mystery and allowed the reader to ponder the question. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Quill~]

:)Thank you.

[Seanh12]

This poem is beatuiful, great i love it. The image is great really works well with what you have written. Wer the stars even stolen i wonder i love it well done thanks for sending it too me x

[Quill~]

:) Thank you.

[Seanh12]

your welcome

[Grey]

Who stole your stars. I'll go kick his a*s! haha. Such a cryptic my beautiful pink one. ;)

[Quill~]

LOL it's not a bad thing. ;)

[Grey]

I'd be greedy with you, that's for sure and yes utterly selfish wanting more and more and more.

[Quill~]

you are shameless! lol

[Grey]

For that little pink dress I'll be shameless.

[Quill~]

Stop it! (giggling)

[Grey]

giggling? Are you ticklish? hmmm

[Grey]

Where, where are you ticklish?

[Quill~]

that's a secret. shhhhhh

[Grey]

Secrets are fun to figure out. Lets make it a game.

[Quill~]

hmmmm what to do....what to do.

[Grey]

I'll post picture of parts and if I'm close you have to write a hot poem about them, the closer I am to your most ticklish spot the hotter the poem has to be. Deal, right here in front of everyone? hmmm

[Quill~]

what?!! you're putting me on the spot? Ha!

[Grey]

We're looking for the spot, then I'll be all over it. Deal or no deal?

[Quill~]

sure. :))

[Grey]

Let's finish this on our profile walls, rather than continue to be shameless on your lovely poem.

[Quill~]

why thank you for considering my poem. lol
you're so thoughtful.

[Leigh]

Typical

[Dennis A. Clark]

Gluttony. Give him an inch...

Nice haiku.

[Nick.B]

I think it was stolen, and it never was seen again, anyway we all had that one who we opened up to them and they took it all away...great job

[Baby Ricochet]

People always want more. It's the fundamental human predicament

[Quill~]

Beautiful one Quill...
All it needs in this one
And beyond ;-)

- Elisa

[Quill~]

:) Thank you, Elisa.