Literary Monsters...

Literally.

To sate her thirst for blood,
she whispers veiled lies,
gathering heartless cowards,
as Conspirators align,
pouring her poisonous ink,
black venom into their empty minds,
rallying literary monsters,
hatred dripping from their mouths,
walking zombies, given daggers,
to stab the heart, and tear it out;
A blood sucker is she…
unleashing the ferocity she beguiled,
hiding a scandalous secret,
within her wicked smile.

Reviews

[Relic]

There's character in your pen that can't be beat. Nice one.

[Quill~]

:P Mean characters eh?. Thank you Relic.

[Leigh]

You have packed a punch with this one, no holding back

[Sky]

She's a wicked character. Your good at this. Great write!

[Grey]

ah oh, sounds like trouble to me. Well written Quill

[Baby Ricochet]

Great venom in this poem. Outstanding

[Seanh12]

I like the poem its very intersting . Strong words, the poem has teeth and bite well done. I love this poem indeed and i love the quto at the start of the poem. The poem is very dark and raw thank you for a good read.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the quote and the poem. A tiger had no fear of the weak. I like the story in your poem. I wanted to read more. Left a opportunity for more poetry. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Nick.B]

An interesting way to describe what I see that's a gold digger, it's dark and raw and I kind of like it...great job

[quinfinn]

hey, i think i know this woman....but seriously, what a wicked and profane write, in the sense of innocence, i mean. awesomeness!

[Quill~]

lol Thank you! My girl is raising (two) middle fingers to that, but you can't see the pic too well. Oh well. :)

[quinfinn]

tiny pic, but i see it now, yes!!!!

[Quill~]

Yay! So glad it's there. (even a tiny bit) lol

[David Scott]

This poem has teeth!
I'm glad I'm not a sheep... ha
Very strong write and a very strong warning if any one is paying attention.

[Quill~]

Thank you, David...sometime having sharp teeth is good. :)

[David Scott]

Oh, I know. Just as long as you are not the prey! Two "carnivours can enjoy each others 'teeth' well.