Naughty ;)

A naughty Senryu.

 Naughty boy you are...
My G-string between your teeth,
Play a tune for me? ;)

Reviews

[Steven]

Garter clips come off with a lovely sound.

[Quill~]

:D Thank you.

[That_Girl]

Not bad not bad. Can't ever stand "smileys" in poems but to each his own.

[Quill~]

:) Thank you for your honesty. I love them. :)

[That_Girl]

Anytime. I used them a LOT... anywhere besides poems lol ;p

[Quill~]

:)

[That_Girl]

*use

I can't type today apparently. Anyways, I liked it, good job. :)

[Quill~]

I get like that when I'm tired..and that's all the time. lol
:) Thanks again.

[Jordan's Back]

You have my Organ pumped lol

Wonderful Write ;)

[Quill~]

:) You're cute! lol
Thank you.

[Leigh]

There's nothing like the twang of elastic to set the mood :-)

[Quill~]

I believe you're right. ;) Thank you.

[TheDuchessDiary]

Hahaha. You're such a naughty girl. :)

[Quill~]

:) Thank you sweetie.

[David Scott]

How about "The Devil Went Down..."
I did not see you as a naughty girl. ;-)
Should have known... You love poetry... Duh.
Fun read.

[Quill~]

I'm only human. ;) (I do love poetry)
:) Thank you.

[Baby Ricochet]

:)

[Quill~]

:) Thanks.

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

Awesome! It's probably sound like one of them old redneck rubber band songs! Nice visual and audible possibilities! ^_^

[Quill~]

:) Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[quinfinn]

i have read "naughty" and i have been naughty....thank you again!

[Quill~]

LOL Thank you, thank you!