Naughty ;)

A naughty Senryu.

 Naughty boy you are...
My G-string between your teeth,
Play a tune for me? ;)

Reviews

[sounds of shadows]

very nice - slowly reading through your senryu. this is my favorite so far.

[Quill~]

:) thank you, glad you enjoyed!

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Three lines...WOW. They blew me away ;)

[Quill~]

:) thanks!

[Nick.B]

Interesting opening, boudoir, boudoir (where all the "action" happens) must be someone hardcore who holds a "guitar string" between his teeth :D, great sensual and hot write...

[Quill~]

;) you know the guy has talent when he can do that! lol

[Jack Frost]

ok, so that did a bit more than make my mind tingle ;P absolutely adored it luv

[Quill~]

:) well thank you, the feeling is mutual (like your writes)

[Wondering Mind]

your use of the senryu structure is naughty.. not that I'm complaining, or have a right to...I wonder what sounds can come out of a G-string!

[Quill~]

not sure about anyone else, but I hear humming. lol :)

[Quill~]

thank you! :)

[Grey]

I don't like to hold the g-string in my teeth! That just cages the tongue.

[Jack...]

Nice guitar...always in tune I'll bet.

[Quill~]

the g-note is a nice one. :))
Thanks!

[Coyote Poetry]

Some songs are better memories then other. You took me to a good place with your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Quill~]

memories are wonderful. Thank you!