Damaged Porcelain

A two-sentence horror story, inspired by the legends of Hallowe'en.

My daughter approached, glassy eyes unblinking, tears of blood on her porcelain cheeks with her doll cradled in her hand. “She made me give her my eyes; she sees everything now.”

Reviews

[Andy Leavy]

Wow. Two sentences was all it took to scare me more than most modern horror movies. Awesome, would be interested in reading a longer horror story. If you can convey horror this well in two sentences I cant't imagine what you could do with 25+ pages.

[Charlotte Williams]

Thank you so much for the review, it is so encouraging to receive feedback - I appreciate the comment, and the boost in confidence that came with it. Have a blessed day!