Lucy

Lucy

A Poem by Charliegeorge
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Break-up's suck,, boohoo poor me.

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Each day feels the same

Every dream I forget my name

I awake to paint mundane

I wish you slept the same

 

Carried out, swept back

Drowning was never easy

Impossible if your feet never left the ground

Head in the clouds, sounds like heaven

 

It’s just a lens

Making life pretend

You were just a dream

More perfect than you seemed

How evil can stupid be?

© 2013 Charliegeorge


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I love your rhyming pattern, it flows very nicely. However, you stopped rhyming very sudden. Well done, looking forward to more ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on March 25, 2013
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Charliegeorge
Charliegeorge

London, United Kingdom



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I'm studying a Degree in Music Journalism, as well as contributing articles to Clash Magazine, Art Wednesday and Spindle Magazine more..

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