Too Late'

i'm taking my heart out

putting it into a box

i'm not going to have a doubt 

because it's going to be locked

nobody can have it

not even you

i'm not going to have anymore slits

because i'm finally through

i'm through with you

and i'm through with us

i'm no more stuck like glue

and you can't made a fuss

don't miss me

don't come running anymore

when your free

because i'm done with this war

open up your eyes

see this pain your causing

start being wise

and stop pausing

keep it walking

go straight

stop coming back knocking

because now its too late

your too late

because i'm gone

your not coming into my gate

i'm moving on

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

the rhyming wasn't great but it sounds better then the last and at least theirs some rhyming in this one makes it sound more like a poem.
Some of the rhyming was good though this was better then the last.
Although the story line in the last i liked better.

[Samuel Dickens]

You've got some great rhymes and rhythm going on here. It's easy to let one's self be pulled into a relationship and then quickly find out that it's wrong and will never work.