Bestafar

Bestafar

A Poem by Charliee
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This is an Elegy to my Great Grandpa

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I don't know where you went
But you're gone now
I don't know how it happened so fast
But it did
I miss you always smiling
And telling us jokes
And letting us know that you loved us
I miss hearing you play the harmonica 
And telling us stories about the farm
Many years lived with joy
But no more to come
With a stone to mark where you now lie
Up in heaven but still by my side
I know you are smiling from up above
Watching over us
But one day i promise
We will be together again

© 2013 Charliee


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Is this for Yabby Bestafar and Aunty Bridgette, too? I Love this.... I was taught to "fear god" when I was little, but the ones who told me and taught me to, didn't. : ) Wonderful tribute that also gets mixed in with the loss you feel, and nothing compares to such in our lives. : ) *Big Hugzz* xoxo -Mark


Posted 11 Years Ago


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Is this for Yabby Bestafar and Aunty Bridgette, too? I Love this.... I was taught to "fear god" when I was little, but the ones who told me and taught me to, didn't. : ) Wonderful tribute that also gets mixed in with the loss you feel, and nothing compares to such in our lives. : ) *Big Hugzz* xoxo -Mark


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am so curious? Was this a grampa or uncle? Or parent?

I am sorry for your loss. This is so sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Charliee

11 Years Ago

this was for my Great Grandpa that i was close to and Thank you!
Steve

11 Years Ago

You are welcome. Your words are strong and your style is good.

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Charliee
Charliee

ghaziabad, utter pradesh, India



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I am a 15 year old boy i like to write but i know i might not be the best at it. But if you read my writing and you would like to say something about it then be honest about them:) more..

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