Only When Your lonely'

So you guys broke up

i don't understand

you stop talking to me, 

don't answer my calls, my messages, nothing

then out of nowhere you want to see me and talk to me again?

you message me and call me

yeah

now cause your lonely

you didn't miss me or love be before

but now i understand

only because your lonely

you only miss me and love me when your lonely and you have nobody else to turn to

but i'm not lonely

i'm stronger than i was before

and your not going to make me weak and break me down again

i'll let you stay lonely this time

because i opened my eyes and saw what you really were

and who the real you was

and i don't need you in my life

all i need is myself

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Damn!! This is something I have never heard a girl say to me, ever. : ) I am told and have seen it with friends, that breaking up with someone is tough on the soul, but to hear it the way you have written it to poem, knowing that this person F'd with your heart.... hurts to see. I don't even know you and I am glad a girl in my past didn't feel as passionately about "moving on" as you are determined to in this very poem. Charliee, you are intense, and I Love it!! Still, I would want Charliee in my best graces, and not the worst ones. All that fire in your gut is going to protect you in your future to help notice BS when it turns up in someone else's face before you!! *Big Hugzz* Burn his pictures if it helps.... : ) xoxo -Mark

[rohit sapra]

To be honest I can relate to this poem of yours and the strong emotions you have expressed so well. Good Writing.

[Emrick]

"you only miss me and love me when your lonely and you have nobody else to turn to
but i'm not lonely",beautiful lines.

[Charliee]

Thank You:)

[Steve]

I like it. Its original and strongly emotional.

I think you should highlight a few words though to make it easier. Maybe making some words all caps, or a larger font? There is so much emotion that maybe separing some key words or underlining them or something would make it more powerful.

[Queen of Spades]

I like the point you make. There are some grammar mistakes, but just little nit-picky things that, if I pointed out, would just take away from the actual meaning. I like how when you write, I can feel the emotion. Is this from a personal experience?

[Charliee]

Thank you and yeah it is

[Queen of Spades]

:) No problem :) Keep writing!