Jealousy'

I may be a jealous person toward some people

mostly you

I know i may care much more than i should

but i do for you

when i see you with her

i admit i get jealous

i get mad and irritated

when i really shouldn't

you pull me in

a way where i dont wanna let go

but i know i have to

and i cant let my jealous feelings come out

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Man, I miss High school and all those keg parties. I wore my beer goggles about 3 or 4 times a week, and I never took notice to anyone that was jealous of spending time with me!! : ) I had about 2,500 to 3,000 numbers to call at any given time, and for specific reasons, but never got to "hear" jealousy spoken in front of me. I would have loved it, if it didn't turn violent in some way. Capitalizing the first "I's" look pretty confident when doing the other ones in the lower case, as if you are a bit guilty of what you are writing. I, also, think that it was probably a little unintentional to write the I's in different ways, but I really like it. Be jealous. It's better than anger. Once it starts to feel like anger, redirect it to work in your favor that suits everyone, and not go the selfish or self0destructive route, like those little things when we may see an ex going out or screwing with someone else..... and burn down their house or something. Burning down houses is a no-no!! lol xoxo -Mark

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The lines are carefree... the intent is clear from beginning to end... I would suggest this:


I may be a jealous person toward some people

mostly you

I can be a jealous person toward some people

mostly you


I know i may care much more than i should

but i do for you


I know i care much more than i should

but i do for you


As you read the follow lines...


when i see you with her

i admit i get jealous


i get mad and irritated

when i really shouldn't

you pull me in

a way where i dont wanna let go

but i know i have to

and i cant let my jealous feelings come out...


You've already made that evident in the end you're jealous in the verse... Thanks for sharing...

[Emrick]

Jealousy is a normal feeling.even our God is a jealous God that's why he doesnt want any of us to join the evil one. Anyone truely in love must have that feeling of jealousy.