If You Love Me?

If You Love Me?

A Poem by Charlie Ragsdale

I'll always wondering why you never let me get the chance to say "I wanted to be with you for the rest of my life?''

If You Love Me?

After all the things I did for you this is what you repaying me be sleeping with someone else who doesn't given damn about you in the first places.

If You Love Me?

At 5am going through my phone looking at all the pictures of us being a happy couples.

If You Love Me?

Then why did you choice him over me?

If You Love Me?

You shouldn't left me heartbreaking and disappointed.

If You Love Me?

© 2015 Charlie Ragsdale


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by rule Charlie, whether your in College Park, Ga., Detroit, Mi. or anywhere else on this
planet, if a person loves you, then they shouldn't try to hurt you. The police were called on
my neighbors who were having one of those knock-down,throw the clothes out the door,snatch
the torn tee shirt off squabbles last Saturday night..Then on Sunday they were both holding
hands going to Sunday school. When there is love (I imagine) hate is always so close to the surface.

nice poem my friend...dana

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I will not take apart your piece which has your pain and feelings in it as we both know, She don't love you any more. Structure needs work just as your relationship appears to need and it is like your poem, I can help neither. Good luck my friend, let your pain pass, reach out your hand and grab another nice a*s.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I know the feeling of heartbreak, so many questions asked.
how can someone love you then leave, one of the hardest things to go through.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sad, if this is based on true events then i am really sorry. She most definitely didnt deserve you if she supposedly loved you and did that. - xoxo Lotus

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Charlie Ragsdale

8 Years Ago

I was 13 years old and I thought she was the one but I was wrong
Lotus Flower

8 Years Ago

I'm sorry sweet heart
Lovely wording!
Well done!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

by rule Charlie, whether your in College Park, Ga., Detroit, Mi. or anywhere else on this
planet, if a person loves you, then they shouldn't try to hurt you. The police were called on
my neighbors who were having one of those knock-down,throw the clothes out the door,snatch
the torn tee shirt off squabbles last Saturday night..Then on Sunday they were both holding
hands going to Sunday school. When there is love (I imagine) hate is always so close to the surface.

nice poem my friend...dana

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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