by rule Charlie, whether your in College Park, Ga., Detroit, Mi. or anywhere else on this
planet, if a person loves you, then they shouldn't try to hurt you. The police were called on
my neighbors who were having one of those knock-down,throw the clothes out the door,snatch
the torn tee shirt off squabbles last Saturday night..Then on Sunday they were both holding
hands going to Sunday school. When there is love (I imagine) hate is always so close to the surface.
I will not take apart your piece which has your pain and feelings in it as we both know, She don't love you any more. Structure needs work just as your relationship appears to need and it is like your poem, I can help neither. Good luck my friend, let your pain pass, reach out your hand and grab another nice a*s.
This is so sad, if this is based on true events then i am really sorry. She most definitely didnt deserve you if she supposedly loved you and did that. - xoxo Lotus
Posted 9 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I was 13 years old and I thought she was the one but I was wrong
by rule Charlie, whether your in College Park, Ga., Detroit, Mi. or anywhere else on this
planet, if a person loves you, then they shouldn't try to hurt you. The police were called on
my neighbors who were having one of those knock-down,throw the clothes out the door,snatch
the torn tee shirt off squabbles last Saturday night..Then on Sunday they were both holding
hands going to Sunday school. When there is love (I imagine) hate is always so close to the surface.