Darkness

Here I go

stepping back into reality

a world full of fallacies

help for this darkness is

drowning me...

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

You expressed your emotions really well.

[Bare trees]

This delves into a dark part of the mind and all the scary things on the outside. The last two lines sound flat so I would agree with the comment below. This write is a deep one.

"Help!" for this darkness is
drowning me...

[T]

Some punctuation would keep this from being confusing.

[Jester]

Lovely.

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I would love to feature this on there.

Thanks for the amazing write!