. : Fleeting : .

This is a poem I wrote quickly after someone fed me a line. I didnt have muhc problems with this one, It kinda of just flew out.

 

 

I have heard that love is something Fleeting

But i disagree because my own hearts beating

 

The way i feel when I love you every day

its impossible to believe in what they say

 

This feeling ive come to love so much

The warmth that comes from just your touch

 

Never thought you would even want this feeling

But now I cant imagne my heart not being yours for the stealing

 

My heart now beats to the sound of your voice saying "I Love You"

            Holding that close I only may muster "I Love You Too"

 

 

 

Reviews

[.nicole.]

i really like this, i really can fell your emotions when you say... Never thought you would even want this feeling But now I cant imagne my heart not being yours for the stealing.

[Ebb and Flow]

I absolutely love this. It reflects the way I feel for my other half f 6 years. This is well written and so beautiful and the rhyme is perfect.

Krys