All for You

Writing writing writing 

that's all I can do to please others 

just write out this fake feeling

Special only one all hers

no matter what I do it's unpleasing

lock it all forget it put it in the lockers

listen to me but she ignores

walks away with a new idea

i would do anything to get more

when I feel like giving up via

disappearing she comes back to cause a war

hard to look around yet again be a

lost cause or worse never again

do I want to go through this 

constant fighting like hell's den

that's all for today am I right Chris  

Reviews

[Kezia]

Very well written. I had a bit of difficulty comprehending the message you were portraying but it is a very lovely piece. I especially admired the first two lines, I'm sure everyone here can relate! Haha 9/10

[CrimsonShinigami]

thanks I was helping out my cousin with her homework since we learn different items at school so I was all like why not