Blood Stained Hands

Blood Stained Hands

A Poem by CrimsonShinigami
"

It won't go away

"
I did nothing at all
So why does it not go away
I look at them and they are painted
Painted no smeared that'ts not it
It's dyed red dark red that is 
illuminated by the Full Moon's Light

Don't Touch Me! You're Dirty !
I hear it constantly in my ears
Pounding against my head 
I cover my ears but it isn't working
I touched a wall once
and every time I go back 
I see the same bloody hand 
in the same place

No matter how many times I wash it
...............it never goes away
when will it stop
how can I make it stop
My fellow companions
why did you let me live
For war isn't the first time
The first time I ...... Died
My love for you is endless
and yet I haven't killed
the burden is too much
and you knew me all too well

© 2016 CrimsonShinigami


Author's Note

CrimsonShinigami
THis is fiction

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The piece is very well written. I did not know you were refering to war until the last set of stanza's good work. Your work is beautiful in that it exposes to the reader what you are feeling.

Posted 8 Years Ago


CrimsonShinigami

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Hi CrimsonShinigami,

Wow, very heavy topic: war. It is a very strong piece, good title too. In the line, "my live for you is endless," did you mean "my love for you is endless?" Thanks for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

Posted 8 Years Ago


CrimsonShinigami

8 Years Ago

I did ooops i got a new keyboard at that time ill fix it
Schatzi

8 Years Ago

It is easy to do.

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Added on September 17, 2014
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CrimsonShinigami
CrimsonShinigami

Edmonton, Canada



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I like writing poems and stories but I never had the chance to show others they may not be as good as others but I tried my best. I enjoy reading books that have a good story plot. I hate quiet room.. more..

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