Soul Sealed Wasteland

Soul Sealed Wasteland

A Poem by CrimsonShinigami
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Many experiences for those who drew the short straw

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Sitting all alone shivering in the dark
People walk by and think 
I ain't going to be like that
Not knowing the true meaning of misery 
is something that can be forgiven
for not all can feel what we are experiencing
No one wants to welcome those with open arms
They lose themselves to drugs, weed, gambling or drinking
Unable to face reality
We humans are fragile and yet we have a high ranking society
who says that the weak must be eliminated
who told us that our world we live in is the untamed wild
that its steal from or be stolen
Many have lost hope but some still cling to what's left of their lives
Lives are just there to give us a good time
These days people look back into the past 
where their lives were perfect until 
they ruined it and it had been shattered to pieces
Everyday is h*ll for them
the passing moments are an endless decade 
The swamp is where the people had given up
They don't want to come back out 
This sin we carry is for all to bear 
even those who did nothing
 

© 2014 CrimsonShinigami


Author's Note

CrimsonShinigami
I have some doubts about it but I think it's missing something

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Like the theme, the closing lines are powerful, only suggestion I would make is "Many have lost hope but some still cling to what is left of their lives,"

Posted 10 Years Ago


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CrimsonShinigami

10 Years Ago

i see i'll change it thanks for the tip
really good just one suggestion :) ''that its steal or be steal from'' steal should be stole in the middle of be and from :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 31, 2014
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CrimsonShinigami
CrimsonShinigami

Edmonton, Canada



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I like writing poems and stories but I never had the chance to show others they may not be as good as others but I tried my best. I enjoy reading books that have a good story plot. I hate quiet room.. more..

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