We are Angels

Angels what are they?

Why is it that white is pure? It is dirty with only a physical touch.

It's like us humans and living things as such.

For there is a meaning that we carry on our true desires.

An addiction that last forever it burns us like the everlasting fires.

We all have wings but what is special about it is your deeds.

How far do you want the things. So much you would kill or steal what about the needs.

We start off as all white when your life is born.

The color black erases your nicest traits and emotions are torn.

Everyday is a mistake waiting to happen. Tick Tock

The black is growing by the day click goes the Lock.

Little by little we try to change but it`s just a major step back.

Repent, apologize, contribute I long to see it in its track

We are judged by others and as we die our wings are shown

It shows us what we have grown

Black and white the natural enemies 

For every sin we break there are penalties

Thank you very much

Is what we say when we lost our clutch

Burning is for the liars

and peace are for the loyal squires 

Oh the wonders of the world people are freed

as God plant`s his perfect seeds

We who are here are to mourn

as our colors begin to become worn

White is a limited place as chalk

Perfect as it can be. It`s always mocked

It does not wanted to mess up until it hits the truck

It`s time for the white to losses it`s luck

White is a cloud fall apart and breaks and thrown

It`s like a little campaign of a loan

We truly are angels it`s a good chemistry

Now help yourself to the soothing remedy

 

Author's Note

Opinions I tried to add some detail

Reviews

[Thaddius]

Seems like some pretty intriguing ideas in here, fall from grace, etc. I encourage you to break your scheme. There is a forced quality that happens when you thrown in an arbitrary word just to rhyme it, and then don't expand on or justify that word, also through the resulting missing syllables. I think you'd get a more vibrant poem if you let it breathe and didn't worry so much about the AABB rhyme. But really good and has lots of good ideas

[CrimsonShinigami]

Thanks I had a hard time trying to see what human being could be as if angels but since a had a limited rhymes that I learned so I thought I would play with them