Things Unnoticed

I dont know if it makes sense or not but can you read it and tell me if it does?

Things Unnoticed

 

Sitting alone

On my own

Watching the others

Talking to one another

Watching them laugh

Watching as they waste their day

Casting me out like a stray

I laugh as they think I’m strange

I’m normal yet they are derange

I’m the one who can see the world

I’m the one who can see the truth

They are blinded by so many lies

This world is in its own disguise

Hiding away hoping not to be seen

Hoping nobody is to keen

Filling our eyes

With what we want to see

Not what’s really there

As the tears drip from my face

Getting yelled at being called a big disgrace

Their eyes filled with hatred

As they treat me like s**t

And every hit

Scars and stains

With their hateful words

Their distasteful souls

Times like these

I see the truth

And try to wash away their lies

Humans are the big demise

You may say I’m wrong

And shut me out

But trust me there is no doubt

I see the world

And how it turns

These are the things that are trying to hide

That will never  be able to die

As we all suffer internal pain

Whether it was the cause of some else

Or because of our own lies

Never deny 

That this world has grown cold

Never deny

That everything that you hold dear

Will die and disappear

Never deny

The truth that lies before

As this world will never give

All you have to live for

Is this world

This is the truth

Don’t tell me I lie                      

Don’t tell me no one ever dies

Don’t tell me I’m wrong

When you don’t know a thing

Don’t tell me your right

When you don’t go through my pain

You don’t know the truth

You just label me and walk away

As if I am sickened

With a disease every day

Contagious and afraid

Unpreventable and considered

Dead but truly feel alone

As I stare at myself in the mirror

I see me

Alone and afraid

In this god for sake end world

No love

No pain

Numb

As the hum of a humming bird

No life

No happiness

As things pass by

Hearing the screams and cries

Time stops and takes the time to hurt

But never to mend

As I see the people race by

Not seeing the terrible crimes

Unnoticed

Untouched

As if it never happened

Amazing it sounds

But the voices go down

As the cries start to rise

More people began to die

Starvation

Abuse

Being hanged by a noose

Being raped by a maniac

Be stolen in a stack

These monsters are real

We all should take great deal

You may not realize it just yet

But don’t forget

These things are true

These things are quiet thought out through

Just as easily as me and you

These things are in the world

Filled with pain

Filled with exact precaution

I see as the dead pile up

The missing rise

The great misery comes to mind

Seeing these things

Watching them bleed

Watching them suffer

All they did was love one another

And try to live a perfect life

No harm

No pain

Yet someone thought they got what they deserved

These are the things Unnoticed.

                                - Poison (Rin)

Author's Note

yes i have spelling problems and grammar problems you can point them out but ill notice them sooner or later. Hope you like! oh and i use - Poison (Rin) as my writer names lol if your curious

Reviews

"I'm normal yet they are derange" With this line you can write "deranged". It doesn't matter if a poem doesn't rhyme exactly; as a matter of fact, most poems don't.
The poem did make sense. I think I get what you're trying to say in this poem: You feel rejected or shunned, like you're not good enough. But remember this; popular people are only popular because we make them that way.