Rain

Inspired by Rayyn

I like rain. I enjoy the pitter patter sound it makes against my window in my room. I like how it washes away everything and makes it smell nice outside. I like how it makes the day darker and gloomy. It makes me feel so peaceful. I usually stay inside if I can but not when it’s raining. I love the way it feels against my skin, the way the droplets hit the top of my head. It’s soothing . I like to think that the sky is crying, weeping just for me. I like to think the clouds are there to comfort me, to tell me it’s all gonna be okay. The rain is their way of patting my head and telling me to cheer up, it’s all gonna be okay, we’re here to cry with you.

I’m happiest when it rains. Or maybe I should say I’m only happy when it rains. My loneliness is ebbed because my friend the sky is reflecting the way my heart feels and crying for me, just for me. I feel at peace, soothed by the rain’s sound and it’s gentle touch. But then the sky stops crying for me. The clouds disperse, and the sky brightens. It moves on, forgetting about me, like everybody else. The sky may have cried but it’s usually bright and happy, it just has it’s sad moments. I wish I could be like the sky. Inside my mind, it’s always downpouring, there is never a bright sky… I wish it rained more.

Author's Note

This isn't necessarily true or false.

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Ugh... clichéd depressed teenaged ramblings. I see you cribbed from the "Garbage" song "I'm Only Happy When it Rains".... how original of you.

And then there's that millennial "everything's here just to cheer me up or ruin my life" theme... the logic of a completely self centered generation. What's the saddest part? Most of you either don't get it or get offended and run to a safe space.

This is also poorly written, lots of incomplete sentences and omitted words. Especially in the last paragraph, you can tell you got lazy at the end when it starts to read like a child wrote it.

Also, check your "about me"... you spelled 'writing' as "righting". Seriously, on writing site you can't even be bothered to spell the word 'writing' correctly? Part of the word is in the frickin websites name ya lazy moron.