More than a Man

A song wanting to be more than a man but a success.

I’m only a man

Wondering who I am.

I’m only a mystery

To society I am history.

How this day will end

I don’t know,

But I’m tired of falling

Where on earth will I go?

 

There is hope,

Hope beyond the river.

There is truth,

Truth to all men to come.

There is love,

Love for the poor abounding.

Just don’t give up

Don’t give up,

I need you.

 

I’ve been wondering some time now,

Enough questions of when, where, how.

I won’t stand still no longer

It’s time now that I get stronger.

I won’t just stare at the door

Waiting for what’s in store.

Oh, I will make my move

And success to the world I’ll prove.

 

There is hope,

Hope beyond the river.

There is truth,

Truth to all men to come.

There is love,

Love for the poor abounding.

Just don’t give up

Don’t give up,

I need you.

 

 

Author's Note

Why did I choose iron man for this picture? I wish I could answer that question.

Reviews

[Sarah Marie]

definitely great! -uplifting and real

[not true]

Wow! Excellent poem. There is hope in every word that you say. I just have to take the step. Good job.

[deadly healer]

the picture for the poem is like the title ''more than man'' its like we are in need and youre telling the people not to give up. its a beautiful piece in itself. truely amazing. enjoyed this very much.

:D deadly healer

[Alex W]

"There is always hope. Even a fools hope." I live by that quote lol (I think from the LOTR trilogy)

Hope is all we have really, hope and our personalities. That's all you need.

A great poem.

[R E Tree]

It's so out standing I will definatly remember this poem. As I am somebody that gives up too easily. This poem encorages me not to and keep trying

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Iron man is strong and always wins ..
I like the poem of always knowing there is love and hope if we don't give up.

Chloe

[~ Otto Girl ~]

Great job. I love how you say Just don't give up Don't give up, I need you. Keep up the great work.

[Emily Paige]

i love this!!! great job ^-^

[Senseless whatever]

Great write. literally 'sings' of hope. I like the way you changed schemes alternating between verses.

[Ice QueenJen]

this was a beautiful way to express your feelings, and in the end we have hope!