Your Voice Caresses My Name

Your Voice Caresses My Name

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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like a ghost dances to the beat of a heart that's been broken............

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A cold wind blows into my soul
as a ghost dances
to the beat of a heart that's been broken
by the promise of words.
Until, there is no more time left to ache
for what has not fallen
from the air you breathe
to be seen or heard.

Your silence speaks inside of me,
calling out to be tears
selfishly chaining this cold wind
inside of my soul,
to remain.
All that I love has been painted
by the promise.................
of your words,
and the sweetest sound I know
is your voice
caressing my name.

© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
*Art by Jean-Jacques Cazin

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Where Neva do you find these excellent pictures to go with your poems. I love it. It adds life and more beauty to your poems. But I love this poem as well. Yes, I also find that the last few lines are my favorite. You always bring the poem together beautifully. Another beautiful write.

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Haunting and beautiful words in the poem. Sometime need a Ghost dance to free the heart and soul of dead weight and pain.
"and the sweetest sound I know
is your voice
caressing my name."
Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote


Posted 12 Years Ago


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Where Neva do you find these excellent pictures to go with your poems. I love it. It adds life and more beauty to your poems. But I love this poem as well. Yes, I also find that the last few lines are my favorite. You always bring the poem together beautifully. Another beautiful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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So beautiful, just it evokes a feeling in me. I feel the first in eof the 2nd stanza is is very powerful, bears a voluminous meaning

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Brilliant poem! I loved your choice of words! Keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


stunning as always Neva, you are a incredible poet

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very beautifully done....speechless, I especially love the last few lines

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow Neva, this is such a lovely write, I really enjoyed this write so much.

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Added on June 2, 2012
Last Updated on August 4, 2012
Tags: voice, soul, cold, wind, broken, heart, ghost, name, promise, dance, words, caress

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

GA



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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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