my fingertips find your picture, caress your lips......
I caressed your face in a picture of you
with fingertips wanting to know
how the light fills your eyes.
Immediately my fascination turned
into a rushing drive
held perfectly in the middle
of where your heart touches the warmth
of all my memories.
These thoughts alone gather
to capture the moon,
can you not see me wrapped
in continuous seasons
when I walk under the same sky
above where you sit?
My mind wanders and I close my eyes,
wishing you were here,
my fingertips find your picture,
caress your lips.
*Man Ray Photography - Hand on Lips
Many of you are aware that I am a widow, this particular piece is not about my husband who has passed but merely about looking at a picture and missing someone who sits under the same sky that you do.
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this is so dreamy could hardly fathom the depth...
i ran my fingers to your face ,wondered what strength fell over it
what does it hide underneath,was always surprised,wish you told me
what strength you gathered beneath,how you managed to collect
how you reflect to me,my thoughts all taken by you
how happy am i just knowing that i walk beneath the same sky like you
its the same world i live how i liked to touch ..face and lips
lovely write..
This is absolutely gorgeous, the longing and the emotion behind this piece are so powerful, every line packs such an immensity of feeling. You express what we have all felt in such a breathtakingly beautiful way, thank you for sharing.
This really hit home for me. I was looking at old family photos just yesterday. Seeing friends and loved ones that have since passed. Life...how we do take it for granted! This was beautiful.
The poem is beautiful and sad. I like the thoughts and memories in the poem. A photograph can bring back a memory and a kind face. The complete poem was amazing. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem.
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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