All My Heart Can Do

All My Heart Can Do

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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You are a spirit, one could say...........

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You hold me deep inside my bones

with thoughts that wander
to be born again
each morning.
Yesterday whispers
until my body sings
to be seduced
and I fall in love with you
once again,
without warning.

You are a spirit,
one could say,
delicately racing
through all I reach out
to feel.
Each night you rage
like an ocean
inside the softest image,
and all my heart can do..
is humbly kneel.

© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist *Emmanuel Garant

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By the way, you have a great eye for the images you choose to go with your poems, this image here being no exception.

My favourite dab here is the first line, 'You hold me deep inside me bones.' I just like the notion of being helf from within like that. It seems soooooo deep and potent. Well done.

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A sweet longing stamped in the credentials I shall call nevas own way Beautiful dear

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Beautiful!

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You sure are a hopeless romantic :) I love it. The last four lines take your breath away...gorgeous!

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You have the most romantic poetic heart I know..swooning over this..your phrasing is sublime..

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Oh Neva..:) Sigh.. To be reborn again and again in that love is such a magical feeling. You remind me that it exists out there and is to still be believed in. During the day it could be a simple thought as you watch a cloud pass by in a blue sky...at night the raging ocean and all the gifts it leaves on the shore..for more thought more moments of spirit.. Just beautiful..x

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Yesterday Whispers - Love that line, Neva...

Sorry to hear you have been Ill. Please get better..

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The passion seeps through each word here. You have portrayed your love in such subtle and delicate terms which make it a soothing and enjoyable read, as always. Stunning poem.

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ooooh sistah... its like your in my head or something!! can relate to this write to the fullest!! you penned it so well!!

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Goosebumps.....

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great blend of emotion

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Added on February 23, 2012
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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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