All My Heart Can Do

All My Heart Can Do

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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You are a spirit, one could say...........

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You hold me deep inside my bones

with thoughts that wander
to be born again
each morning.
Yesterday whispers
until my body sings
to be seduced
and I fall in love with you
once again,
without warning.

You are a spirit,
one could say,
delicately racing
through all I reach out
to feel.
Each night you rage
like an ocean
inside the softest image,
and all my heart can do..
is humbly kneel.

© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist *Emmanuel Garant

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By the way, you have a great eye for the images you choose to go with your poems, this image here being no exception.

My favourite dab here is the first line, 'You hold me deep inside me bones.' I just like the notion of being helf from within like that. It seems soooooo deep and potent. Well done.

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what love sometimes make you do is such a strong emotuion tat alwasy makes you weak in the feet and in the mind is an uncotrollable feeling when love is eally deep i love it !:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love this. I can't tell though, is it a double entendre or a reverent picture of thankfulness for prayer. Or am I just way off all together :) No matter- It's a beautiful visual

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That was amazing:D

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One of my faves! To fall in love again, "without warning"; "and all my heart can do..is humbly kneel." Just wow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This shorter piece of yours is a work of art. I love the first line of the second stanza, love to be found everywhere, in everything.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

By the way, you have a great eye for the images you choose to go with your poems, this image here being no exception.

My favourite dab here is the first line, 'You hold me deep inside me bones.' I just like the notion of being helf from within like that. It seems soooooo deep and potent. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Filled with awe struck imagery that took me on a journey of love! Beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is awesome, love in a journey of words.

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This is a wonderful write, I especially enjoyed the line, "delicately racing
through all I reach out to feel." I can relate to so much you have written in this, thanks for sharing


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Artwork and poem are beautiful. I like the journey you took me with the desire and the story in the poem. The poem statements were alive and strong. A great pleasure to read this amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Added on February 23, 2012
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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