I Love - Falling Without Expectations

I Love - Falling Without Expectations

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I love how you roll into the air as a whispered voice,

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I love falling without expectations,

seeing yes in the garden of your eyes.
Being blinded
as if the earth moved
when we are sharing
the same sweet skies.

I love feeling as if I have been struck
clear to my soul.
When I run headlong into your arms and find
the half of me that is,
only with you, becomes whole.

I love the moments when I can sit very still
and get lost in the light of you.
The brilliancy of your heart
outshines any diamond
in expressions of love’s hue.

I love how you roll into the air
as a whispered voice,
from lips confessing love reigns
inside your heart.
The sound takes me places
where my heart leaps to start.

I love waiting to relive the treasure
of velvet minutes I hold of you
in my memory.
They are the sweetest interruptions
and I will embrace them
forever, lovingly.

© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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One problem as I'm reading this. Just one. There's stuff connected to writers cafe on the page, and I have to sully the page with my view. So very beautiful Neva. So heart meltingly beautiful. I can't get this silly smile off my face. I'm riding on an infinity loop of joy.

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I love. :-) Sweet and delicate. Compelling.

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A sweet poem. First Stanza I love.

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Lovely words :)

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Once again, your choice of words is seamless. A perfectly flowing piece of art.

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aaaawwww... what a sweet read, simply beautiful Neva as always!! I wish the memories that interrupt me held more of a feeling like this... that was a great read sistah!!

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awwww now this is one of my favorites
I cant put one line or stanza on here that I like better than the other, I love the whole poem. I agree this makes ones heart melt!
Beautifully written Neva

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"They are the sweetest interruptions
and I will embrace them
forever, lovingly." Mmmm so beautiful Neva.. I could just drown in your words with hope...xo


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One problem as I'm reading this. Just one. There's stuff connected to writers cafe on the page, and I have to sully the page with my view. So very beautiful Neva. So heart meltingly beautiful. I can't get this silly smile off my face. I'm riding on an infinity loop of joy.

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...and I LOVE every single one of your peoms. They're beautiful treasures. The last stanza is my favourite. :)

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