I Love - Falling Without Expectations

I love falling without expectations,
seeing yes in the garden of your eyes.
Being blinded
as if the earth moved
when we are sharing
the same sweet skies.

I love feeling as if I have been struck
clear to my soul.
When I run headlong into your arms and find
the half of me that is,
only with you, becomes whole.

I love the moments when I can sit very still
and get lost in the light of you.
The brilliancy of your heart
outshines any diamond
in expressions of love’s hue.

I love how you roll into the air
as a whispered voice,
from lips confessing love reigns
inside your heart.
The sound takes me places
where my heart leaps to start.

I love waiting to relive the treasure
of velvet minutes I hold of you
in my memory.
They are the sweetest interruptions
and I will embrace them
forever, lovingly.

Reviews

[EMF]

One problem as I'm reading this. Just one. There's stuff connected to writers cafe on the page, and I have to sully the page with my view. So very beautiful Neva. So heart meltingly beautiful. I can't get this silly smile off my face. I'm riding on an infinity loop of joy.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Simply a splendid piece...
art at its best...

[Pratik]

that's a wonderful piece of poem... heartwarming and romantic..

[Gomer LePoet]

Exceptional piece of beautiful poetry here Ms. Neva. There is a garden in your soul!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Lovely, piercing piece. Piercing my spirit greatly.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Suddenly I got the UFO song "Love To Love" in my head... so completely romantic. Loved every verse, each one a great definition of what love should be.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautifully penned as always, Neva. You never disappoint a reader with your writes. I adore your poetry! Brilliant.

[Aidz]

Rhythmic splendour coated in Nevaesque brilliance :)

[emmajoy]

Beautiful.

[Philip Smith]

That was from the heart and it effected me, because it hit home. You have a great way of bringing your reading not only into the story but feel it too

[Muse]

The love that offers the feeling of falling and weightlessness. Is the best kind indeed.